I'm Daniel from the Kootuitui Summer Learning Journey team and I'm excited to start commenting on your blog posts this week and over the summer.
It’s great to see your opinion about the issue, it is certainly a complex one. I like your conversational tone, like a back and forth conversation between people, with questions and answers. It made your post really pleasant to read. I like how you pose a question to the reader at the end, I’m not even sure how I’d answer it except to say that I’m glad I’m not Donald Trump.
I think you doubled up on your second slide which is no biggie just made me have to squint. Your title slide is really good and peaked my interest, the flag makes it really clear what you’re about to talk about, nice work. Just remember to try to attribute any images you use that you didn’t make. You can have a look at the pictures on the activities page for an example.
I’m looking forward to seeing more awesome work from you this week and throughout the holidays. Remember that week 1 of the SLJ program starts on the 16th of December to start earning those points.
Hey Kahu
ReplyDeleteI'm Daniel from the Kootuitui Summer Learning Journey team and I'm excited to start commenting on your blog posts this week and over the summer.
It’s great to see your opinion about the issue, it is certainly a complex one. I like your conversational tone, like a back and forth conversation between people, with questions and answers. It made your post really pleasant to read. I like how you pose a question to the reader at the end, I’m not even sure how I’d answer it except to say that I’m glad I’m not Donald Trump.
I think you doubled up on your second slide which is no biggie just made me have to squint. Your title slide is really good and peaked my interest, the flag makes it really clear what you’re about to talk about, nice work. Just remember to try to attribute any images you use that you didn’t make. You can have a look at the pictures on the activities page for an example.
I’m looking forward to seeing more awesome work from you this week and throughout the holidays. Remember that week 1 of the SLJ program starts on the 16th of December to start earning those points.
Daniel